I have a lot of plans. And I hope that all my plans will became true next year.
At first, I will learn. I think that is the main thing. I will focus on the English and physics, but I'll try not to forget about the other items. Secondly, I am going to learn to drive. Well, better than now. Also, I want to keep my old hobbies. I'll play the guitar and go to a sports section. Already by the summer, my family and I are going to visit the Baltics and to look at the local architecture.

Убери запятую после hope и think.
A sports section.

Убрал. Всё норм?

Яина уроке, потом подробнее посмотрю)

Неплохо.

В первом абзаце повторяешься со словом plans

Имелось в виду "не забуду о других предметах''? Тогда "about other subjects". Артикль мне кажется лишним,но тут я сомневаюсь. Удачи!)))

Надо создать специальную тему для помощи в таких ситуациях.

Классно промтом перевел.

I have a lot of plans. And I hope that all of them will become true next year.
At first, I will learn. I think that is the main thing. I will focus on the English and physics, but I'll try not to forget about the other subjects. Secondly, I am going to learn to drive. Well, better than now. Also, I want to keep my old hobbies. I'll play the guitar and go to a sports section. By the next summer, my family and I are going to visit the Baltics and to look at the local architecture.


Вроде так.

I have a lot of plans. And I hope that all of them will come true next year. Так лучше, не?

At first, I will learn. Вместо learn стоит использовать study.
I'll play the guitar and go to a sports section Тут sports sections

Но по сути, автор тупо перевел онлайн, а затем заюзал чужие знания. Сам нифига не сделал.

Точно, спасибо, Инк.
А секция вроде одна, не?

Но он же не знает, в какую именно? И не обязательно одна.
Поэтому артикль надо бурать (вроде).

Как все подключились, когда я уже здал -_-
Нет, я писал всё сам -_-

Значит тебе надо подучить лексику.